Hello, This is my first map. There is a giant wall with crenalations on both sides. Your king is Lord Whoodo and you will be attacked by Lord Nicks. He sends a massive army of about 5,000 men. Watch yer gatehouses(weakest spot). I added some eye candy which i did not make. I got them from a few maps and forums(just letting you know so you don't think im a_______? Well, Hope u like me creation. Please rate me or whatever you do. I hope i can be like NAT or some of the good builders some day.
Not a bad map by a long way but there are things that need addressing. It was a square 3.0 and I believe that is what the map deserves. For playability you don't have much time and there is no stone or iron - no trade at all allowed so except for a few archers and spearmen and maybe the odd crossbowman you make there isn't much you can do. Normally this type of map it would be too easy but know it is too hard. Their archers cleared every single man off the walls - I had no hope! Too hard - maximum play on normal. Quite fun apart from that. The low-down on the map design. A huge wall going from one side to teh other, straight but thick with good work with the keep and gatehouses. The gatehouses are the weak point though. Inside the wall there is a settlement that you expand and some pointless eye candy. Just not needed, especaially the polo match from Glazebury Muze - be more subtle when taking ideas. Outside the wall there is barely anything - a few trees and a destroyed tower satnding next to some wall - pointless, it looks out of place. Much more work needed for map design - almost a two. Quite creative - I do feel that is is similar to our own map - The Great Wall of China from a few months ago. Be more creative. Ok storyline, rather short and plain. At leat an effort. Not a bad overall effort - you need to think for youself though. No copying!