Captain Torn Kanante, standing on the highest point of St. Etienne, the only fort that is important now. The only fort, that can decide the future of the kingdom. The day enemy approached, captains voice wafted in the air like a voice of giant. That day, he was the only man who wasnt afraid of enemy. Because he was the only man who wasnt afraid of death...
I wasn't a great fan of your maps earlier on but i can see that you have grown as a designer. You now add more detail into your maps and i'm happy your improving. Thats not to say your maps perfect though. I feel the equalizer tool is needed in some areas and it looks very unatractive when you place sand right next to grass(you should of seen that) but what can i say we all have different taste.The first building was designed rather well and looked pretty attractive but i didn't think much of the others. Nothing i haven't seen before and overall not really creative. I was expecting more from you. I suggest spending a little more time to make the balance and terrain right in the maps to come but for now it's ok. Good Job
I'd also extend on your opening story. A very poor way to promote your map as Emperor Alexus has already pointed out.