Now this has a couple of eyecandy pieces, but they will all be explained in my story, Felkhas the traveller, which you can read in the inn. (ok so this is a promo stunt, just work with me here, It IS a good story i hope. If you dont think so, tell me why in the reader comments thread) what this is is a town that will apperar in the thread. Ive left some room for you to build on your own so have fun!
This is good map to look at.You cant relly play it.The story was good but not with the game.All in all its ok.
Posted on 02/29/04 @ 12:00 AM
I am afraid you have a lot to work on - the map is very roughly designed especially the walls with the mid plain next to them - does not really work at all. There is some room to build and build I did - I made quite a successful economy. The eye candy is nice in places although still a little ordinary - I would recommend that you look at Glazebury Muze to improved your skils in the eye candy department. The map design was really not too good - I am trying not to be rude but a lot of work is needed - download and look at higher rated maps on stronghold heaven to see how the map design is done. The storyline is good, I enjoyed reading it although it did not really fit with the storyline. Overall fine to play but a lot more work is needed with your map design especially the perimeter wall. Not a disaster but some real thought is needed in later maps. Keep trying - if you want some more info/help feel free to email me.