Best feature of the map I liked how you had limited space to put buildings it was pretty hard getting everything going because of the river. The invasions would of been good if they were smaller.
Like i said above after the first two invasions i got slaughtered obviously you didnt playtest the map or youre much better at stronghold than me.
Map Design: 3
Pretty nice map design although I didnt like the cliffs how they just had trees on them and nothing like rocks and shrubs also with your grassland you just had a whole bunch of trees.
The story needs to be more descriptive and longer. Dont worry too much my storys arent that great either.
This a very good map for being your first one and I congratulate you.
P.S I forgot to get Mad at you ;)
Posted on 11/12/05 @ 08:22 AM
The limed space makes the playability quite good, due to the spread of the river i found myself biulding in rather odd ways, a 3 here means a good overall job but ultimatly more time needs to be put in
As stated this is not a map anyone could complete. I too was absolutly swallowed by the enemy after the 2nd invasion. For your next map go to the forums and look for playtesters because you clearly need them.
Nothing really appealing here, dull and boring. The sort of thing you see in the default maps that come with the game.
Map Design: 3
Too obsessive with trees, no natural feel to the map and work must be done in this field to warrent anything over a 3. Once agin i'm being generous but please look into this.
No real story, make a story that sets a mood going into the game, it helps generally to write a rather long story. In this case a 2 is given due to the lack of the description
Being your first its a decent attempt but work is needed. Don't worry we all started like this,