here you are..your parents are killed by a awfull fever, now you live whit your grandfather.your grandfather died by a ambush of the pig, now you have to seek your way outta there else they will kill you .
build a ship and get outta there.
I'll rate you soon...just fix this, it should be aN awfull fever and aN ambush by the Pig
P.S:get a minimap creator, it's in utily files and easy to use.
Posted on 01/07/06 @ 06:53 AM
Well it was quite easy but just took a long time, i think 1011 wood is a bit to much.
the invasions of the pig were easy as long as you just place the archers the right way, they did destroy all my food building everytime though.
To much forest, no place for food buildings plus you can't build more graneries, that is annoying, i had low food all time and it was hard to get it balanced but that kept me busy rethinking my strategy wich is good
I like the part of the ship but maybe you could've placed some more events
Map Design: 4
the mountain around the castle is done nice and i like the waterfall, try expirimanting with diffirent trees on diffirent spots (pine on higher ground and berch near water)
well it was short, not a real story, more a small report on what happened, the instructions were clear, it could score higher if it had been written from the point of you grandfather dying and the whole takeover from the castle from him to you.
Ther were some languidge mistakes in the story, ill put them here so you can fix them.
it's with not whit
, between grandfather and general would be nice
pig now is planning i think sounds better but is not wrong
family instead of famiely or something
enemy not enamy
to make it clear you can maybe put the word enemy before spies so you get enemy spies, i thought i could train spies in the form of engeneers or something (lol that's just my stupidity right...)
and lastly this: you can make leather armor but no diary farm is availiable, that is essential to make leather!
this was my score, i finished somewhere in 1085 i think
playing level: 500
Troops lost 15%: 8500
71 stone extra: 710
35 wood extra: 175
146 fruit extra: 680
Previous score: 0
It seems alot but it's small, could have scored some higher without these things.