I found this map to be quite simple but I enjoyed it. There was a large range of buildings and soldiers. The gaps in the invasions were a little too large so I entertained myself by filling the entire valley with moats...
For balance I found this map a little too easy for my taste. By the time the first invasion was there I had platforms full archers and a few bandits attacked. Fires were easily put out, lots of resources, and by taxing the drunk peasants i soon had my 25000, ect.
I like the idea of the land of milk and honey, I just dont know where I've heard it before... Anyway I liked the nice big, simple fountain in the middle of nowhere though the symetrical trees made it look a little unnatural.
Map Design: 3
The map was a little basic and bare and the river was a little wierd with water flowing off of the side of that hill. Again I liked the fountain.Just needs a little more terrain work, apart from the north east hills its either flat or high.
Not much to say here, the story was a little empty with it just saying you won some land from the wolf. I would also have done a spell and grammar check.
Additional Comments: Not my favorite map but I dont hate it. Happy gaming! Keep it up you can only get better!