Another serious submition and I wouls like to see some ratings and comments.
The story: The "Mage" survived...But how?There were so many spirits atacking...And...And...Oh I'm confused...Maybe I should track him...
We traveled two days.And he stoped at the main king's outpost.
-Halt!Who's coming?!-The guard said.
-Shut up...-the "Mage" said quietly and destroyed the guard from a distance.
-WOW!That's amazing,-I thought.
-So?Will you let me in?-The "Mage" said.
-Let him in!-Shouted the guard captain(The mision objective).
-I shall go to. They should let me in.Besides I'm a "Warrior" of the king.,-I loughed.
-You shall not go there!
-what?!Who's talking here?!,-I looked around my self and shouted.
-We are generals,the royal knights!with no armor or weapons!
The king gone mad!He just kicked us out of the castle and took everything we have!He just closed him self in his fortress with his "Mages" and Paladins!
-This means I will not pass...And he shall kill my family...,-I cried.
-Hmmm...I know! there is one weak part of the outpost!-The man Said.
-But we are only two!
And then I saw the rebels...There weren't much of the force but still If there is a weak part...We shall make an asault with our brain...Not the muscle
-By the way My name is Marco
-Nice to meet you Marco.There is our vilage ahead it's on your service.-The man smiled.
So we reached the vilage...
There was a small Manor House,Few farms,baracks And armory.
-The mage shall wait there for some time, so we have some time to strike.,-Right Marco?
-Yes.We do not have much time.Let's move.
Aftermath:That's was a tought battle But we made it.Not many rebels survived.And the "Mage" managed to escape...
-What?The army is allmost here!-I started to worry.
-I have an Idea!-the man said.
-So what shall we do?!We are doomed!
Is there no way out?!-the rebels cried.
-we are not ready to die!-the man shouted.
-What is your plan?-I asked.
-I shall dres up like a general.
-Sounds good!-I smiled.
That was a good plan!They realy believed us!He also managed to send them to the unknown land for a "Mision"!
-Now let's track the "Mage".,-I said.
-The men are too tired to go further.We shall stay here for night.
The "Mage" has stoped too.,-the man said.
-very well.That's a nice idea.Let's sleep now.Tomorow will be a long day...
I Say again:please leave ratings and my english is not very well.