The 7th part of the fortune seeker campaing.Please rate It.
The Screaming Desert is a sacred place that contains powerfull Magic and 5 tomes of knowlage.the sixth tome is hidden at the top of Cruma tower.our only hope to stop the Valmar's revival is to find all the tomes.
-Emonuel Casian The priest of lord "Granas"
-Victor,I think we should retrieve the tomes...-I said
-we have no use of them, marco.
-The holy book said there is a tample in the screaming desert.It can hold more than just tomes of knowlage.
-Allright lets move.-Victor said.
We traveled for weeks The biggest part of the warriors died during the travel...the Sand was hot and the sun was even hotter...They just couldn't go anymore...
-Sir!there is an oasis ahead!
-Finaly!The water!-,I said
We stayed in the oasis for 2 days.Soldiers wanted to rest.
Everything were fine untill one day...
One warm night the young man came to our camp:
-Please!help me!I...I...-He cryed
-calm down!,-I said-What just
-They burned my vilage! And my friend is somewhere in the ruins!
He asked me to bring some help!
The big rock fell on him and I can't push it by my own!
-Allright we will help you...Show us the path...-I said.
-There it is!oh no!look in the tower!-He cryed.
-Take off that archer!
-Oh thank you,Sir!Thank you for saving me!You seek the tample right?
-I can show you where it is...Let's move...
Aftermath:The archers in the towers of tample were No one else than undead the high priest of the tample
Was Emonuel Casian himself.He showed us the knowledge of magic.He wanted to guard the tomes by himself.That wasn't the loss we still had no use for them.So we left it.our only hope to defeate the king and set my family free is to destroy the evil Garden of Shilien...
Works well, but I just feel that Impossible maps are well, just too damn impossible lol. I couldn't beat it. But I mean if people can finish the mission, then I guess its not too impossible. But all in all, a good concept and works well. Well deserved points
Well, I just chose to give you a 4, not because you are outnumbered, but by how much. I would maybe think that 2 series of walls are ok, but I felt that 3 was too much. Its like you got to play with the mind of the player. Make him feel that its an impossible task, and every time he advances, he gets slaped in the face again. But he still has to make it through though.
Its an abviously good idea, but You have so much free land to make stuff with. To add character to your land is not only having a good design talent, but also having creativity. But it was a cool idea of having a fire started in a village, which fits very well in your story. I'll probably use that in one of my next invasions. Thanks for the idea! lol
Map Design: 3.5
Good map design, but more pointed towards the basic than the best. Again, theres lots of flat ground, and maybe having a few hills around the castle would make it abit more challenging for the tunnelers to find a good place to dig? I would try to make the oasis blend more with the desert. I dont think the grass just stop where the desert starts. I think its more of a gradual setp.
Good story. Dont change it.
Nice map, and a nice series. I love marco lol. Keep making maps for the series, or make a new series!