My first crusader map, enjoy. I'm not used to Crusader so be fair, how did I do? Story text is inside, I'm in a bit of a hurry right now cause im reformatting comp so...gotta go.
Here's a bit of a teaser...
The great expanse of the desert, rolling with heat and shifting sand,
is perilous, unhospital, and deadly. Ahib looked out across the waste with
wonder. His father had told him they were to visit a seasonal camp soon.
It would be nice to be out of the wind for a while, even if it would only be to
gather food and supplies for the next trip.
They had been travelling between several cities, trading tiger skins,
jewellery, and trinkets. Ahib's father had bought him a dark green sash at the
last time they had visited the bazarr at Ankara.
"Remember, Ahib. The next camp is in a little known part of the desert,
very dangerous. If there is any trouble you are to go inside and open the door
only for me or anyone else in the caravan," His father warned him, "Sleep now, son,"
He soothed, "We are Sand in the Wind."
Cool map. Want to exchange ratings with my new map Baghdad, Iraq - 1301 AD ?
[Edited on 08/26/06 @ 08:29 PM]
Lord Gandor File Author
Posted on 08/27/06 @ 05:27 PM
Sounds good. I'll play and rate.
And could people tell me if there's anything horribly wrong? I playtested and I thought I was careful but knowing my luck...
And it was all done in a hurry. The computer was being reformatted in...10 minutes so the story probably aint that long. Sad even. I might update it or something.
And the reformatting messed up and we have to wait for a recovery CD so I'm on the old comp.
[Edited on 08/27/06 @ 05:29 PM]
Lord Gandor File Author
Posted on 04/21/09 @ 01:25 AM
If you ever stop back to read this comment, thanks a bunch on the comment. It's been a while since I've looked at this map, and it's nice to see a new review.
I'm glad you liked the landscape, I was going for tasty.
peter2008
Posted on 04/23/09 @ 09:00 AM
Am glad my words reached you and that I felt your intention right.