"The Old Man"
The old man was sitting in the tavern of The Great Lord Crusaders castle when a he heard a large thunking noise.The rest of the tavern heard it too,as all talk ceased immediatly.
"What was that," he asked the bartender, who shrugged.
"It sounded a bit like a...,"A woman at the bar said,but was cut short because just then a large stone crashed through the roof and landed on her.The tavern went into a panic then,becuse they knew then that they were under siege.
The great Lord Crusader was awoken by the sound of crashing,screaming, and the cries of people dieing.He knew instantly that, his castle was under siege.
The Wolf was gathering his army together for an attack on Lord Crusaders castle.He had already hit it with lots of rocks and intended to keep doing so, until he ran out of stone.
A young child-george- was hiding under the horse stable, watching the stones fall from the sky, wondering where his mum was.Then he saw her running around calling his name.He ran out of a his hiding place,and the last thing he saw was a large stone coming above him.
The "d Great Crusader" Fled his stronghold just in time because a large flame arrow crashed through one of his many windows on his stronghold and it began burning to the ground.Over 100 people burned with it.
The old man fled the tavern to a dreadful scene.There were arrows flying over the walls of the killing many.Large flame arrows were hitting buildings and burning them and the people inside.It was a dreadfull sight seeing people running out, there flesh burning.The Old man started running to the armory get some weapons when he heard an almighty crash.He turned round and saw that they had taken down the gatehouse a men were swarming in killing everything in sight.The last thing he saw was a arrow flying to his face.
Lord Crusader hid in one of his wells with ten of his peasents.Pretty cramped, but they surfived.Lord Crusader moved to a new spot.... But little did he know it was near The Wolfs 3 new camps...
This map is my second map.i spents some time on it and the story too.PLEASE RATEPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZ
Your map needs work. There weren't any room for farms in the left side of the river (which had unusual networks),on the right side only a couple of wheat farms could be biult. The keep on the the lower right side is cornered with a pile of stone too close to it. there were a rather huge number of lions trapped inside the walls. It took me 2 months (with 20 archers) to wipe'em out. Work on the waterfall. it seems to be flowing everywhere.