I liked how you mapped out the route needed to take in order to defeat the map, gave it a sense of direction.
I think your update was to nice to the invader, maby one of two many "extra" troops. I did like that you added an invasion, kind of a relif army for the besieged.
I love the dam and the aqueduct. It has helped me with some of my own ideas about water features. The tower in the middle of the bog/swamp was great too, I love that it couldn't be attacked by conventional methods.
Map Design: 4.5
Take what I put on Creativity and dido it here.
I stumbled upon this map long after you had put up the updated version so I never got to see if you had a story with the original upload so just to be fair I gave you the average rating, sorry!
not overwhelming on the eyes, I kinda like that. There was stuff to see and check out, but still a good game to play, really decent map.