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The Greedy King

Author File Description
lady_stronghold6
File Details
Map Size: 400x400 (Large)
Number of Players: 4
Balance: Unbalanced
Difficulty: Normal
Minimap:
king hadwin sits on his throne,anxiously."when is dinner going to be served,irwin?" he looked at his servant,"the cook say's a little bit longer and it will be done,my lord".king hadwin sighs,he has been waiting for his meal for over an hour now and everytime he asked his servant how much longer it would be,he would always answer the same.
(i might as well do something) the king said to himself,"where is the the lady,irwin?" king hadwin asked,"in her room sewing,my lord",the king sighed again,(the queens busy) he thought,thinking they might have gone outside for a stroll.
since he nothing better to do he asked his servant if he would like to walk around a bit outside,irwin said yes he would so they went out and walked."my lord" irwin said rather nervously,"the other kings they have sent you a warning of war....",king hadwin stoped suddenly and turned to irwin,"what?" he started to look angry,"yes,my lord,they say they are tired of you,always sending your men out and destroying their farms"."now irwin!,you know as well as i do,we need more food for all of the peaseants,unless they have not figured it out yet,peaseants have quite an appetite and i am not one to keep the food away from them".
now king hadwin was a bit of a liar,he did'nt feed his peaseants very good at all,what he would do is greedy and cruel,he steal all of their food and then destroy the farms and place his own (the other kings did not have guards guarding their farms because they all trusted each other)
so now king hadwin must be punished for his greediness.
"the kings will be attacking tomorrow" irwin said.

i hope you like the map!
good luck-lady_stronghol6 ^-^
AuthorComments & Reviews   ( All | Comments Only | Reviews Only )
gemini911 Playability: 2
Not very...enticing so to speak

Balance: 5
Map is almost symetrical

Creativity: 1
I have seen other disasterpieces, so to speak, as this one. Hopefully your just new to mapmaking and novice as apposed to expierienced.
Map Design: 1
Lacks uniqueness, possibly could take any where from 5-10 minutes to make

Story/Instructions: 4
They were decent


Additional Comments:
I suggest making a new map starting from scratch or alter this map so its not a map you would see in a fictional story, most of the resources positions make no sense in terms of geography. I am not trying to put you down, just constructive critism.


[Edit – This review has been retracted by staff as part of a retrospective moderation of reviews. This was carried out to deal with the issue of some reviews not meeting the minimum standard. The content of the retracted review has been left to stand as a comment. The author is welcome to contact staff about this. Edited by ericgolf]

[Edited on 12/22/08 @ 11:42 AM]

lady_stronghold6
File Author
i was'nt really trying to make it realistic..
lady_stronghold6
File Author
and my story is fictional.....
AZ ViTrAzhAs Your previuos map was better, but i think you will soon create great maps :)
Mr Reaper Playability: 4
(It was fun and I enjoyd my self)

Balance: 5
(Really perfect balance)

Creativity: 4
(Well from the minimap it looks better but still it not bad)

Map Design: 4
(The lake could be a bit more realistick)

Story/Instructions: 5
(A very good story and it's really for the map )

Additional Comments:
This map was not bad ,just like your first.

[Edit – This review has been retracted by staff as part of a retrospective moderation of reviews. This was carried out to deal with the issue of some reviews not meeting the minimum standard. The content of the retracted review has been left to stand as a comment. The author is welcome to contact staff about this. Edited by ericgolf]

[Edited on 12/22/08 @ 11:43 AM]

monkcrazy5 i'd have to agree with AZ a little more detail could make it look veryrealistic, and teh more realistic it looks the better chance of getting a higher rating you have just and some thickscrub and scrub to the oasis grass
monkcrazy5
Rating
3.0
Breakdown
Playability3.0
Balance4.0
Creativity2.0
Map Design2.0
Story/Instructions4.0
Playability: 3
It was an interesting game, I used one of my newer designs , "the killing pit castle"

Balance: 4
it was ok balance I thought that from some castles one resource was further away, and from another one it was closer

Creativity: 2
the design was a little odd, you overdid the resoures though, it would have been more interesting to build more hills and spread the resources out a little more

Map Design: 2
the design would ahve been more interesting, if you would have been able to get on the plateus
Story/Instructions: 4
It was a pretty good story

Additional Comments: id have to say your last map was better


[Edited by staff as part of a retrospective moderation of reviews. The comments by the reviewer are deemed to constitute sufficient justification of the category scores in this case and so the review stands. The author is welcome to contact staff about this. Edited by ericgolf]

[Edited on 12/22/08 @ 11:48 AM]

danielwang i think this map is pretty good...even though u are getting pwned by the comments...lol


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Rating
3.0
Breakdown
Playability3.0
Balance4.0
Creativity2.0
Map Design2.0
Story/Instructions4.0
Statistics
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Size:442.62 KB
Added:01/22/07