Overall, good map. The objectives aren't too hard or too easy. One issue was the amount of availible resources. One word: TONS. No problem at all to build a successful economy. Another issue was the design of the map. Now that your newest map has come out, you already improved what I was going to comment on
Anyway, the design of the map could be improved by balancing the resources, improving the terrain height and variance and filling in boring flat areas.
Stroy was a bit short, but nothing that can't be improved....overall good map, glad to see you're improving. Keep Designing!