You (Peter the Wolf) and Everard the Boar were both enemies for years. It all started when you were 5 years of age, how you both thought that their father is a stronger knight than the other's. You were known as Peter, because you were born near a gigantic rock that no longer exist named Wolve Petre. He was named Everard for his father's hatred to wild pigs. You and Everard fought about the smallest things, even though your fathers were lifelong friends. Then, one night, Everard escaped out of his house and dissappered for 15 years.
15 years later you were a great Duke of Cambrellia, your home town. You had a small but manageable army that you often fought off invaders with. During one night, you heard a loud "BOOM." Peter went outside of his small wooden keep to find most of the town destroyed, only a few people remaining and just a couple buildings. Right next to you stood a dead soldier who had a scroll in his hand, which read:
Me am back, will destroy you, and keep the Gold Coast to me. I will send wolves and bad luck on ye town, and I shalt kill thou-The Bore.
You laughed a little to yourself at the bad grammar and spelling on the note, but you knew what was coming is no laughing matter...
Fight off any of Boar's invasions.
Fortify (enclose) your keep.
And have good luck on the map:)
The picture shows how you start out
The game was very fun to play. You had to think before you build the buildings and where you build them. It was kinda easy, but still really fun.
As I said above, it was pretty easy. The invasions were kinda small, and would be fun if the invasions were larger. The wolf attacks and fires made it a little more challenging.
Everything was very fun and creative. I like the black template touch.
Map Design: 5
The map is very good. Probably a billion times better than I can do. Everyone can probably tell that your really improving on your map design. Keep it up.
The story was kinda short. It would've been 4 if you add 1 or 2 more paragraphs. It was pretty nice, though.
Additional Comments: Very good job. The map design was excellent, much better that a lot that I see. In case you were wondering, I rated your first map a long time ago. I rated this one to show how much you improved.
Posted on 02/15/07 @ 06:29 PM
A very nice and fun level. You have plenty of space to build, but not too much, and the landscape offers a good challenge by itself. I beat it the first try on normal and that's good!
The map was kinda easy becouse the invasions are weak and if you really expect a bigger attacking force (as susual) you will have a very strong defensive force. But the map played wel and I felt rewarded when getting the victory screen.
Nicely created landscape and story.
Map Design: 4
The scenery is very well executed and varied. Nicely done!
Kinda short but present. Better than I usually do :D