you and and a small group of your men are fleeing from the crusaders and you stumble across the ruins of an old monastry thinking it abandoned you make you're way through only to be suprised by monks these monks introduce themselves as monks of the twilight they beg for your aid the crusaders will soon be upon them for these monks have been supplying you and your army for many a year now they request help for they will surely fail without it. they say they have sent out monks to request aid from other monastrys but they will not be back for quite a while
so retreating your men and the small number of pikemen and crossbowmen loyal to the monks back to the inner walls you notice the ruins of an old town surronding the monastry and it reminds you off your home before it was burnt and you think of your children and wife. you clentch your fists and ready yourself for the many deaths that are to come.
a nice invason map were you are outnumbered 5 to 1 but you have a higher morale than the enemy who are tired and hungry
please rate as this is my first map i may turn this into a series
well just to say i have decided on making a series 2nd and 3rd map are about quarter and half way finished till then
Posted on 04/09/07 @ 11:34 AM
This map was too easy. Although you had to fight off huge armies of invaders, they only came in bunches, and most of them never reached the gates. The first invasion took a long time to fight off, the second one was easier with a hundred monks on the battlefield, and the third only lasted a few months.
Your map was not design very well. The grass did not level out evenly with thick scrub and scrub, it stopped abruptly. The map was not made very well, and you could have done better.
The story was average, and you could have done better.
Pretty good for a first map.
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