"NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Rose 2 screamed. King Rose is dead now.
He was crying when the king breathed his last breath. So, King Rose 2
is a new king now. The Kingdom is a strong kingdom. It's called the Kingdom
of Rosedlair. When Rose 2 rise to the throne, the Kingdom rise.. There's 5 great
general. So, he command 4 of the general to occupy giant country
of Gorard. And they succeded. Also he could defend against Duc Volpe's ultimatum.
But there's 1 general that's still the King never ask him to lead the war. Someday
she ask the king about it, but he said "YOU'RE A WOMAN, WOMAN IS WEAK!! I DONT CARE IF YOU'RE
THE DEATH LADY OR THE BEAUTY LADY, I DON'T CARE!" Lady Halley quickly angry and said "
YOU'RE.... now, give me a troops and i will ocuppy a kingdom for you!!" If i failed, cut my
head!" "ok, you, i command you to occupy duc de puce's land." the
king said that. Then "That's sounds easy" but quickly the king said
"with only spearman, 9 archer, one catalpult!" She surprised and said "WHAT ARE YOU MAD?"
but the king quickly answered "Be creative!" The real is your king wanted you
defeated. He think that woman is so weak, and not qualified as a general
You, angry and secretly thought "Insolense son of..". But you received it to prove woman's
strength and now you arrived in the southern part of Duc De Puce's land, Alrone.
You brought some peasents without the king's permission. But, Duc De Puce, his scouts discovered
your arrival and Duc De Puce rally most of his troops.. Survive! Show the King the
strength of the woman. And the king won't underestimate you if you can
Yes, i know, Rat is a lacking enemy, but juz try it :)
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This map was too easy for me. The Invasions were not big enough, and I don't think I lost more than twenty spearmen in any.I had built so many poleturners that in a few minutes I would have twenty spears! The first time I attacked I had one hundred and thirty-seven, but they all died. I never even got in his castle, because he did something I didn't expect: He sent almost all his men out to fight me! But as that was happening, a small party of spearmen and one archer went to attack me. I am guessing that he was about to invade me, and I just unluckily attacked before the attack started.
For a beginner, your map design was very good, except you did earth right after thick scrub. To look more realistic, do scrub after thick scrub, and then earth.
Your story is a good length and written fairly
well, but you made spelling mistakes which make the story harder to read.
EDIT: I just saw this review, and now, looking at this map as a more experienced player, think that I might have given Lord Netral a slighty generous rating in some parts. I am now fixing that, and saying why I lowered the score.
1- Creativity: I honestly don't know why I gave this part a 5, other than maybe the part where you could only use spearmen. I'm going to lower it to four, which in my opinion is pretty generous for this map.
2- Map Design: What is new, interesting, or intricate in this map? Not much, really. It's quite flat and uniform. 3.5 is a better rating for this part.
3- Story/Instructions: The story is hard to read, a barely intelligible mess of words. It doesn't make sense, it's short and full of grammar problems, and basically a 2-minute typing spree. 2.5 is a very generous rating for a story like this.
[Edited on 05/08/09 @ 11:21 AM]