This map was interesting to play and I quite liked it.I have to admit the the castle really took my eye.The design is an outstanding display of beauty.For me simplicity and good design are always better than huge symetrical castles with large fortifications.The positioning of the castle is nice.
The surroundings were the only bug.Although the map is good the nature doesn't look realistic.The way you placed the trees is just not right.You just clicked the mouse and draged it right or left.The grass is the same thing it's not a major problem but it looks fake.You could have put a bit more shrubs,rocks etc.
Im not a great mapmaker,im not even a good one, but in my opinion you should pay more attention to the surroundings.If you sort that out than Im sure that,your maps will get a large boost.
Sincerely (Morbid Angel and Lan al Malkier)
[Edited on 07/07/07 @ 06:17 AM]
ZafarIM File Author
Posted on 07/13/07 @ 01:22 AM
Thanks to Morbid Angel and Lan al Malkier,
I appreciate your comments. The weak points you are indicating are really considerable.I am also not a good map maker. I try to improve this area of map making in future.
(edited by Sulis: please don't ask for reviews of other maps in your comments. Post a request in the forums. Thanks)
[Edited on 07/13/07 @ 03:03 AM]
Posted on 07/13/07 @ 08:20 PM
Nice castle, but it sorta looks like a map from original stronghold.
Battle Mage corp
Posted on 07/14/07 @ 01:55 PM
Your welcome we just try to be helpful.See some of the map design tips in the main site they helped us a lot.