This is my first EVER uploaded map, so I don't think it's too great, if you've got some advice for me, please post a comment.
[I have updated the map, and now you have the necessary goods for a good start]
One day, in the monastery in the Valley of the Cross came a strange man with a black cloak. He said he was a traveler, and asked for housing over night. The priest agreed to let him stay over night, and offered to take his cloak, but the stranger said it wasn't necessary, and remained hidden in the cloak. To this day, nobody found out who was the stranger, but he would be remembered forever, because in that night, he set the monastery on fire, and ran away. The priest started praying, and it started raining, and the rain didn't stop for 5 years, forming a lake that would be called from then on "The Lake of Faith", because of the strong faith of the priest that still haunts the ruins of the monastery, trying to find the strange man.
First ever map hey? Looks great for your first map. Good to see that you've used the map PNGer. Perhaps a little more storyline on the download screen (the one you are looking at now). Is it an Invasion, Economic or is it somthing else? Us dowloaders are left guessing....
Posted on 02/24/08 @ 05:00 AM
Yeah, the map looks very nice. But you will need to add some wood for the begining so the player can build the granary!!!
Posted on 02/24/08 @ 07:54 AM
Your first map looks actually quite good :)
Posted on 02/28/08 @ 08:16 PM
this is his first UPLOADED map not made map
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Posted on 03/14/08 @ 02:59 PM
Thanks a lot for posting comments. I would really appreciate it if you would rate it so i would know how to improve my future maps.
Posted on 03/30/08 @ 05:40 AM
Mister Huntley, I do not understand the poor rating that you have given this map.
The source of income is low? Mayhap a reason for that is the once fertile land is now covered in water, and is unable to be sewn with seed and harvested.
Also, if a freebuild is too difficult, then at a certain point it will become just mindless, just where you create money with a flourishing economy.
With this map, however, you are forced to slowly create an economy. A novel idea..
What was wrong with the story, sah?
Posted on 03/12/09 @ 08:23 PM
how did you get the wooden wall so short?? LOVE YOUR MAP. email me at firstname.lastname@example.org