I would say there is a bit of improvement in this map compared to the last but just a few questions..
Is it really a balanced map because one player has a huge build space while the guy in the corner has a small area with only oasis and stone/deer??
The player in the top corner has a huge amount of iron, usually i play maps where i can have up to about 4 for each player with extra around the map, unless to take someone out.
Try and build iron on hills with some rocks here and there so you force a player to only have a few mines. i dont know about anyone else but i think its also better not to have iron touching water , same as a marsh. but i have to say this looks better, im not one for realism but i like a good looking map.
Also make better use of rivers i.e make them look more smooth like real ones, that would be nice.