Well i got to say that i was debating weather or not to give this part of the review a 3. I ended up giving this a 4 because once the invasions finally started, it was kool watchiing the enemy getting mowed downb by my archers. Also you give the player to much time to prepare for the invasions. other than that the map was good.
as i said up above, you give the player to much time to prepare for the attack. I actually ended the game and went to the editor to see if thier was any listed invasions. Overall the invasions were real easy ot fight off, it would be better to have mroe troops attack your base because the first attacks never even made it to the ramp leading up to my base. Also i would include maybe a market. I ran out of food half way through the game >.<
Well the creativity wasnt bad at all. you did something original and i dont think anyone has made a dunharrow so good job for being the first one ;) also good to see lowered wooden walls.
Map Design: 3
the wap design wasnt bad, but it wasnt great either. I would focus more on the grasslands, i would try the raise terrain tool, and the terrain balancing tool. also dont be afread to scatter some stones on the terrain, and try adding more rocks >.< if you played any of my maps, i always cut it close and almost run out of rocks everytime lol. Also im not a big fan of the gravel type terrain to be used as roads. I would find a substitute for that >.<
Well, i know your not english so it was probably hell writing teh story, It also looks like you have put in some effort so you get a 5 on this :D
Overall good map for your first map submitted to the site, i do look foreward to some of your future work.