Now that the dam has been broken, your land has been restored. However, the great quality of your small kingdom's land and the great quantity of resources it holds have caused the unthinkable to happen. Richard's other servants have turned against you. Protect your land at all costs. Kill these greedy traitors! *Note* Even though Richard has no knowledge of this battle, maintain your honor even without his watch.* For story battle, place yourself in the top right, Emperor Frederick in the bottom left, the Marshall in the top left, and the Rat in the bottom right. Frederick has allied with the Rat and Marshall, simply using them to gain control of your land, while knowing he can exterminate the Rat and finish the Marshall later once you are out of the way.
-This map is very similar to "To Survive The Desert" because it is the same landscape. The river now flows though, because you broke the dam either during of after "The Dam".
-Sorry if I seem to be flooding the skirmish area with my story. I have just become re-addicted to crusader and making a story makes it that much more interesting.
i think, your story is quite nice. if you add some more text to each "chapter", it would be really great.
but try to work longer on the designing of each map, add some more details. avoid huge completely empty places and show some reason for the stone and iron to be on your map - for example some rocky hills, old ruins or something like that.
moreover, a slightly less straight river would maybe look more interesting, making more people taking a look at your map.
[Edited on 07/09/09 @ 09:26 AM]
gamegeekkl File Author
Posted on 07/09/09 @ 11:36 AM
Ok. I'll try some new things on the next map. Thanks for commenting.