It just looks unnatural. I understand that this is your first map, so congratulations... but next time, for more appeal you can try making things uneven, oasis less, not include everything available, etc.
Posted on 12/31/09 @ 02:39 PM
Right. The map does look... well, not very nice.
Moreover, the huge amount of swamp and pitch is very far away from the keeps, making it quite... unproductively.