This is my first map. Any comment and review are welcome!
Story : 1231, at a bay. A king from south west(you), have a bay, gifted from his ally. but, lords from three difference places hear that you have the beautiful bay. they are come at same time and make an alliance and want to destroy the king from south west with they powerful military units. With all of his power, the king from south west must defend his castle and guard the bay from they. the bay is a very important to guard because that is a present from ally, for the king who help his ally, the king from the south west, the owner of "A Bay From Ally"
Sorry if my english is bad, and if my story is not good.
First impressions from the minimap are great. The layout of the map looks very interesting, and I can see you took quite some time making it look beautiful. The resources are well divided and I can't wait to play it! I will post a concise review for you when I get back home.
Posted on 05/02/10 @ 06:19 AM
Yeah this is a great one especially if this is your first one. The landscape is really nice. the only thig is the flow between the lake and the oasis, and between the oasis and the iron on the left side (as you did it on the right side) if you would correct this i would give you a 4,5 :D