The story of the first part
You enter the castle and kill your captain, but it was his twin brother, who had discovered the location of his brothers castle.
You go to:" Caspin del Jude", and kill him, during the siege you demolish castle catastrophic to its very foundations.
The next day, scout arrived at the castle, who tells you that a rat has sent an army against you.You quickly renew what can be renewed and packing troops for the defense of :"Caspin del Jude".
I didn't have a really great time palying this map. It was too easy and too short. The enemy attacked only in the first year, I simply fended them off by training a lot of arabian swordsmen. There's also nothing to do with the economy, only an apple orchard should be built to serve food. So after the invasions ended I only had to clear that little pass with my archers and spearmen.
Everything happens too fast in this mission, so the player has to be fast too, otherwise the attacking forces would kill the lord. But finding the correct strategy wasn't too hard and I won for my first try. You should had set a lose timer to make the player attack the camp, cause without lose timer the player can create an endlessly large army and destroy the enemies, like trampling some bugs.
The idea of the map is very original, a short act-fast scenario, I rarely see something like this, maybe a better story would higher the score given here.
Map Design: 3
An avarage desing, has some good parts, but the castle and the hill under it looked very irrealistic and ugly and the whole map felt crowded, which gave a bad atmosphere and a really claustrophobic feeling.
Very badly written story and it is also toooo short. The spelling is terrible, many of the words are unreadable, which is inacceptable in a story.
[Edited on 02/20/11 @ 07:10 AM]
LordOgnjen File Author
Posted on 02/21/11 @ 04:37 PM
I know story is a real 0,and there must be a problem,in the editor i set bandits ,invasion,invasion.Not one two invasions.
Adam the First
Posted on 02/22/11 @ 01:30 AM
Actually I know about the bandits, but I didn't mention them as they had no effect on my economy.
LordOgnjen File Author
Posted on 02/22/11 @ 10:28 AM
Can you go to the map room,and see my story for a new map that i am making.P.S it is Shadow Game 3,soon i will send it for playtesting.