The Lord Kurt, bulided up the fort in desert and marching next.The next place, where they bulid up the castle is County Of Water(1192 A.D.).They have small piece of Archers,Spearmen and one Swordsman he have a one mission in this county...collect the gold to bulid up the army...
The Lord Mekelien is the''Neighbour''of this county and sends much letters to Holy Lord about Lord Kurt...
I've played your second map. Your landscaping is getting better. The combination of lush green oasis to beach wasn't good but at the same time, the idea of three rivers falling in sea was great. Nice use of goods and buildings restrictions. Now turn the angle.
-The scripting was scarce in means of events. You made certain trade and building restrictions but It looks that you haven't got any advantage from them! I mean that if you've restricted wheat trade and enabled bread trade, then you might add events of granary theft to stop the player from getting much money by this source. Same for all others. The invasions you scripted didn't effected me because I won in 1199 whereas invasions were at 1204.
I know you are a beginner and you will develop by these experiences. Happy Mapmaking!
_As far as about story, I think, at this stage it isn't necessary for you to write a long story. Your story is just perfect.
At the end,
Good Luck and Keep Improving!
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