This is a Fotress built by a fictional lord named Vladius Le Roux.The coldblooded ruler which attempt to destroy the world to avenge his father,Arius Le Roux,which was once the ruler of a big empire,but has betrayed by his own friend,and died in the world rulers hand.Vladius almost reaches his dream when his older brother,A knight from a small country called Sparda,which was being separated when their father besieged,murder him for the good of mankind.With tears running down from his eyes,Hawkins kills Vladius and claim his fortress.He became the new rulers,but he wasn't happy. his heart's full of sadness of Vladius death.The place's still called Vladius lair to honour him.The last thing Hawkins do for his beloved brother,Vladius.
I hope you like my map.Comments are welcomed( i apologize if my english is wrong.i'm from Indonesia)
I'll review the map, but only because you asked. ^^
Let me dust off my old review-fingers; been a long time. lol
For a first submission, this is a nice try. There's some interesting tricks and designs in this map, but it's nothing too special. A lot of eyecandy maps make the mistake of having no defining characteristics, by placing random things everywhere in the hopes it will look cool. Unfortunately, you did that... and so did I with my first Eyecandy back in 2007.
Much like the film industry... much like anything, I believe the quality of map making has evolved over time, and if you want a great rating, then you need to do something unique and outstanding, because reviewers aren't as forgiving as what they used to be.
If you drew your inspiration from the "Eyecandy and Landscapes" section, then I'd say you've been looking at the wrong maps; we've seen far too many eyecandys like this. Observe the ones with realistic cities and natural landscapes, and learn from them. Your potential is unlimited.
I hope to see a second submission from you. Good luck.