Hello for all Strongholders. This is my new map and I hope you will like it. The scenarion was made to lose, but I hope you will enjoy to see the collapsing castle. Story is only with map. I made this map over four days, so I hope you will write me some comments or something please. I'm sorry if I write something wrong.
You are seemingly an absolute beginner. If you are interested in making more maps, I recommend that you look at some reviewed maps or at mine maps too. Your map is full of design vaults. The spring on the cliff don’t send the water to the ocean in a direct way, but in diametral directions, so that seemingly the river climbs on the ugly cliff and than goes down. It is a joke, isn’t it. The map is nearly empty, and the far to weak castle and the village are looking as if you used a lineal and circle to draw them. The same if you look at the swamp.
I played the map, and it ended after one minute ….. sorry, 30 seconds, and I couldn’t do anything. More than eight enemy troops at the same month …. This is complete crap. Sorry, I would have liked to write a better comment, but it wasn’t possible.
Posted on 10/28/13 @ 08:58 AM
Ok, well yes it's not good but the comment from skurill is not helpful at all, if you're going to criticise then make it constructive.
For starters make the cliffs look more natural, and a river realistically cannot go up a hill so there are problems there. The marsh just looks like one spread texture, there are ways of making things look good, give it a rough look and put some dirt and grass textures within there using a smaller brush tool, the pebbles texture is quite good on a small brush tool for making roads and paths so maybe you could take that into account next time.
This map wasn't that good but you could make another one so much better, good luck !