This is my first serious submition so Rewiews and comments would be apreciated.
By the way my english is not very well...
The story:I was only a military unit... Just a pupet of the king...but my family is starving...That's why I do what they say.
One beautiful morning of august was an ordinary day...But I was wrong.King sent us on the look out to explore the ruins called "Nimman"
I didn't want to go there but the king said It's not dangerous.He also promised a good payment of 1000 gold coins. This is a real treasure!I never saw so many gold in one place!
The best warriors went to look out.They were my friends... Exept one strange man.King said he is a "mage" or some kind of that.
When we finaly reach the "Nimman"
The "MAGE" said: -This is the "Nimman's" portal!It was used to transport people to the misteriousso called the "maze of Raul"... We shall find out what it is! Any wolunteers?
-But the king sa... I tried to say before he rudely interupted me.
-I know what that fools said!!!For this dumb question you shall go!
I had no idea what awaits me..
-Is there any other way?the portal looks very devastated.and the castle too...
-yes there is but it's blocked by magical barrier...Be careful there is a lot of traps and evil spirits as well...destroy all the spirits and the barrier as well..it will be breacked when all the spirits are destroyed.
So he ported me into the maze...
Aftermath:All spirits were driven out and I heard a straange voice:
HE!HE!HE!HE! Go!save your friends!My minions shall kill them!but don't worry...Your family will be killed as well!after I play with you!They are now traped in my fortress...
-you bastard!who are you?Come here and fight me face to face coward!!!-I shouted as much as I could
-ahhh...Do not worry my fortress is more familiar than you think...Right Marco?
That was my name...The king!It was the king!I ran out of the maze and started my trip to the castle of the king!
Actually this is a nice idea with a solid story. No one should be blamed for that English is not his motherlanguage.
The map is nicely made and surely some work has gone into this.
However, the vast amount of killing pits make the maze an annoying task.
The knight is a very slow moving unit and almost after every corner you have to save/load the map too many times just to get forward. I can see your intend to place them but that is very frustrating.
As far as I understood the story, there is a sequel to follow and as long as there are no killing pits involved, I´d be happy to download it :-)
M1i2K3k4O
Posted on 07/07/06 @ 09:25 PM
Yes, I agree with you. The killing pits are definitely tough. It's hard to actually maneuver your troops around each of the killing pits and the lose condition is losing only ONE troop. That's what makes it even tougher. But really is a great map. How long did you take to make this maze?
SinisterWing File Author
Posted on 07/08/06 @ 02:57 AM
Well that maze took me about 2 or 3 days and playtesting took me about 1 day to test the posibility to win :)
those pits are particaly Invisible but if you look closely you shall see them easily :)
And BY THE WAY I would like to see some ratings on my map :)
Allways yours SinisterWing
SinisterWing File Author
Posted on 07/08/06 @ 03:13 AM
Atention!
All 9 downloaders!download again I fixed some bugs!
Allways yours-SinisterWing
M1i2K3k4O
Posted on 07/08/06 @ 05:05 PM
I'm sorry but have you been hanging out around my maps lately? cuz the thingy you put "ATTENTION all 9 downloaders" is exactly almost what i put (even the number 9) and the "i have fixed some bugs" part.
But i edited that message and switched Attention to "NOTE".
Check out The Mines of Moria by M1i2K3k4O and you'll see what I mean.
[Edited on 07/08/06 @ 05:06 PM]
SinisterWing File Author
Posted on 07/09/06 @ 02:19 AM
Yeah I know sorry if ofended you :)
But I realy fixed some bugs :)
SinisterWing File Author
Posted on 07/09/06 @ 01:53 PM
I am off for a weak!
M1i2K3k4O
Posted on 07/10/06 @ 12:00 AM
O no, you didnt offend me, it was kinda funny actually... or is it fate? What if me and you are secretly evil twin brothers? :P Jokes. Well have fun in your vacation.
Duc Timothy
Posted on 07/20/06 @ 04:44 PM
It would not be fair of me to actually rate this, because I cannot play this. It comes up black when I load it, and it's literally unplayable.